Re: Can you proofread DEP 5 ?

[Justin B Rye <jbr@edlug.org.uk>]

Justin B Rye wrote:
>>     <para>
>>       There are four kinds values for fields.  Each field specifies which kind
>>       is allowed.
>>     </para>
> 
> "Four kinds of values".  But I'm not sure I follow this, unless it
> simply means:
> 
>       <para>
>         Each field must have one of the following four types of value.
>       </para>

Looking at it again, maybe it's saying slightly more:

    <para>
      Each field must have one of the following four types of value,
      as specified in the field's definition.
    </para>

But by now I'm not sure whether this is obvious.
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