Re: latest version of Debian LJ ad is ready
Dear Fredrik Ax,
> Any comments?
Yep; on v0.03:
(1) It looks quite good, now, typographically. Only the a bit too
short lines in the upper left box are a shame ... editing the text
would be good, for example.
s/glibc/GNU libc version 2/
s/package manager/package installer and manager/
(2) I still think the lower left "Debian" should be "Debian 2"...
Cheers,
Kristoffer
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