Bug#753842: lintian: superfluous comma in gfdl license template [license-problem-gfdl-non-official-text]

[Andreas Metzler <ametzler@bebt.de>]

Package: lintian
Version: 2.5.24
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

Hello,
The description of license-problem-gfdl-non-official-text

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Please ask upstream to always use (case insensitive):
with no Invariant Sections, no Front-Cover Texts, and no Back-Cover
Texts.
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does not exactly match the FSF template
<http://www.gnu.org/licenses/fdl-howto-opt.en.html>:

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with no Invariant Sections, no Front-Cover Texts and no Back-Cover
Texts.
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The FSF template does not use a comma in front of "and".

I have no idea which of the two variants uses correct punctuation, but
the FSF variant should be the official one, shouldn't it?

Trivial patch against git HEAD attached.

cu Andreas

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>From 7f77d16ab578aa180828777da9bbcb748ce44c9d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andreas Metzler <ametzler@bebt.de>
Date: Sat, 5 Jul 2014 19:04:52 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Fix punctuation in gfdl text template

Copy license notice from
http://www.gnu.org/licenses/fdl-howto-opt.en.html
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 checks/cruft.desc | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/checks/cruft.desc b/checks/cruft.desc
index 51025d4..a235692 100644
--- a/checks/cruft.desc
+++ b/checks/cruft.desc
@@ -622,7 +622,7 @@ Info: The given source file is licensed under GFDL, but using a
  non-official text for the "no invariant sections" part.
  .
  Please ask upstream to always use (case insensitive):
- with no Invariant Sections, no Front-Cover Texts, and no Back-Cover Texts.
+ with no Invariant Sections, no Front-Cover Texts and no Back-Cover Texts.
 
 Tag: license-problem-nvidia-intellectual
 Severity: serious
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