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Bug#609131: marked as done (release-notes: Typo fixes)

Your message dated Sat, 8 Jan 2011 20:37:25 +0100
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and subject line Re: Bug#609131: release-notes: Typo fixes
has caused the Debian Bug report #609131,
regarding release-notes: Typo fixes
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--- Begin Message --- 
Package: release-notes
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

Hi,

Please find the following minor issues spotted while translating and
reviewing translation.

Regards

David

*** /tmp/typo-rn.diff
Index: en/about.dbk
Rationale: avoid use of non typographic quotes;
	use the same writing as in the following paragraph.
===================================================================
--- en/about.dbk	(révision 8024)
+++ en/about.dbk	(copie de travail)
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
   <para>
     This document informs users of the &debian; distribution about
-    major changes in version &release; (codenamed "&releasename;").
+    major changes in version &release; (codenamed &releasename;).
   </para>
   <para>
     The release notes provide information on how to upgrade safely
Index: en/issues.dbk
Rationale: use the same writing as in other part of document;
	avoid useless dot.
===================================================================
--- en/issues.dbk	(révision 8024)
+++ en/issues.dbk	(copie de travail)
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
 <title>pam_userdb.so breakage with newer libdb</title>
 <para>
 Some Berkeley Database version 7 files created with libdb3 cannot be read by newer
-libdb versions. (see <ulink url="&url-bts;521860">bug#521860</ulink>).
+libdb versions (see bug <ulink url="&url-bts;521860">#521860</ulink>).
 As a workaround, the files can be recreated with <command>db4.8_load</command>,
 from the <systemitem role="package">db4.8-util</systemitem> package.
 </para>
Index: en/whats-new.dbk
Rationale: Capitalize Debian Installer;
	delete a double space
	(long line is a PITA, not changed here).
===================================================================
--- en/whats-new.dbk	(révision 8024)
+++ en/whats-new.dbk	(copie de travail)
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@
 </para>
 
 <para>
-For &releasename; APT automatically installs recommended packages by default<footnote><para>This change implies that disk requirements for  tasks selected through the debian installer have increased too. For more information please
+For &releasename; APT automatically installs recommended packages by default<footnote><para>This change implies that disk requirements for tasks selected through the Debian Installer have increased too. For more information please
 see the <quote>Disk Space Needed for Tasks</quote> chapter in the 
 <ulink url="&url-install-manual;">Installation Guide</ulink>.</para></footnote>.
 This can be changed by adding the following line in

--- End Message ---
--- Begin Message --- 
On Thu, Jan  6, 2011 at 12:08:23 -0400, David Prévot wrote:

> Index: en/about.dbk
> Rationale: avoid use of non typographic quotes;
> 	use the same writing as in the following paragraph.
> ===================================================================
> --- en/about.dbk	(révision 8024)
> +++ en/about.dbk	(copie de travail)
> @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
>    <title>Introduction</title>
>    <para>
>      This document informs users of the &debian; distribution about
> -    major changes in version &release; (codenamed "&releasename;").
> +    major changes in version &release; (codenamed &releasename;).
>    </para>
>    <para>
>      The release notes provide information on how to upgrade safely
> Index: en/issues.dbk
> Rationale: use the same writing as in other part of document;
> 	avoid useless dot.
> ===================================================================
> --- en/issues.dbk	(révision 8024)
> +++ en/issues.dbk	(copie de travail)
> @@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
>  <title>pam_userdb.so breakage with newer libdb</title>
>  <para>
>  Some Berkeley Database version 7 files created with libdb3 cannot be read by newer
> -libdb versions. (see <ulink url="&url-bts;521860">bug#521860</ulink>).
> +libdb versions (see bug <ulink url="&url-bts;521860">#521860</ulink>).
>  As a workaround, the files can be recreated with <command>db4.8_load</command>,
>  from the <systemitem role="package">db4.8-util</systemitem> package.
>  </para>

Fixed these two (r8067).

> Index: en/whats-new.dbk
> Rationale: Capitalize Debian Installer;
> 	delete a double space
> 	(long line is a PITA, not changed here).
> ===================================================================
> --- en/whats-new.dbk	(révision 8024)
> +++ en/whats-new.dbk	(copie de travail)
> @@ -368,7 +368,7 @@
>  </para>
>  
>  <para>
> -For &releasename; APT automatically installs recommended packages by default<footnote><para>This change implies that disk requirements for  tasks selected through the debian installer have increased too. For more information please
> +For &releasename; APT automatically installs recommended packages by default<footnote><para>This change implies that disk requirements for tasks selected through the Debian Installer have increased too. For more information please
>  see the <quote>Disk Space Needed for Tasks</quote> chapter in the 
>  <ulink url="&url-install-manual;">Installation Guide</ulink>.</para></footnote>.
>  This can be changed by adding the following line in
> 
I'm thinking of dropping this paragraph anyway.  lenny's apt already
installed Recommends by default.

Cheers,
Julien

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